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30A- Final Reflection
Final Reflection The most formative experience to me would be the first bug list. Coming into the class I saw myself as an optimistic tu...
Final Reflection The most formative experience to me would be the first bug list. Coming into the class I saw myself as an optimistic tu...
You did a great job of starting your pitch, it definitely grabbed my attention. I think that your tone was great and i could clearly understand everything you were saying. I appreciate the fact that you were standing and not just sitting infant of your webcam. Great job of explaining the problem and your solution. I really like the service your suggesting and your pitch was well done.
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ReplyDeleteThis was a great pitch and I like that you were in the setting where your idea would take place. You spoke very well and had great composure. I think this is a great idea and something that other students would enjoy and benefit from. The fact that your club would also intend to serve the homeless in the community really tied in to what we learned in class about looking into the bigger problems around us. I think it would also be cool to incorporate healthy cooking habits.
You have an interesting club idea but I'm wondering how you would plan to expand your product. Other than classes online, would your ultimate goal be to expand to other universities? Also, how would you organize the voluntary meals? In regards to the video, your enthusiasm was well received and I believe that your attitude is the right one to sell your product.
ReplyDeleteHi Aaron! I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. I thought that you did a great job of explaining your idea. Something that would set your opportunity apart is what you plan to do by giving back to the greater UF community. I think that this is something that no other food service is currently explicitly providing. For the next elevator pitch, I suggest that you look at the form Professor Pryor discussed in his lecture. I think it would help improve the structure of your message. Keep up the hard work!
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